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Friday, June 5, 2020

Recount Writing-On Saturday


On‌ ‌Saturday‌ ‌
On‌ ‌Saturday‌ ‌afternoon‌ ‌my‌ ‌family‌ ‌and‌ ‌I‌ ‌went‌ ‌to‌ ‌the‌ ‌
skatepark‌ ‌in‌ ‌Kaikohe‌ ‌to‌ ‌play‌ ‌on‌ ‌the‌ ‌playground.‌ ‌
First‌ ‌I‌ ‌got‌ ‌my‌ ‌skateboard‌ ‌and‌ ‌I‌ ‌slid‌ ‌down‌ ‌the‌ ‌ramp.‌ ‌
I‌ ‌felt‌ ‌amazing‌ ‌because‌ ‌it‌ ‌was‌ ‌fun.‌  ‌Then‌ ‌we‌ ‌slid‌ ‌down‌ ‌
the‌ ‌massive‌ ‌hole.‌ ‌I‌ ‌thought‌ ‌that‌ ‌was‌ ‌cool.‌ ‌
 ‌Next‌ ‌I‌ ‌went‌ ‌to‌ ‌the‌ ‌park‌ ‌to‌ ‌play‌ ‌on‌ ‌the‌ ‌swing.‌ ‌It‌ ‌was‌ ‌
very‌ ‌high.‌  ‌I‌ ‌was‌ ‌getting‌ ‌scared‌ ‌I‌ ‌was‌ ‌getting‌ ‌
butterflies‌ ‌in‌ ‌my‌ ‌tummy.‌ ‌
After‌ ‌that‌ ‌we‌ ‌went‌ ‌on‌ ‌the‌ ‌big‌ ‌bridge.‌ ‌It‌ ‌was‌ ‌scary‌ ‌and‌ ‌
high.‌ ‌Finally‌ ‌we‌ ‌went‌ ‌to‌ ‌McDonald's.‌ ‌We‌ ‌got‌ ‌some‌ ‌ice‌ ‌
cream‌ ‌and‌ ‌a‌ ‌Big‌ ‌Boss‌ ‌for‌ ‌my‌ ‌nan.‌ ‌My‌ ‌Dad‌ ‌was‌ ‌not‌ ‌
hungry.‌ ‌I‌ ‌had‌ ‌a‌ ‌great‌ ‌time.‌ ‌ ‌
We were learning about...Recount Writing
 I found it easy to… say who I went with.
I found it hard to…write about my thoughts and feelings.
I really enjoyed… writing my story about going to the skatepark.

Next time I need to hurry up with my writing.



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