Going to KFC

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Going to KFC 
On Saturday morning we went to KFC for Breakfast me and my family went to KFC in Whangarei. 
 I was excited. I thought It was going to be an amazing day. 
 My Papa ordered first. He got the food and we ate chips and we drank a fanta and coke. My nan had a Burger. It was amazing. 
 Next we went to the shop to get my nan a Ladder. 
After that we went to my Uncle and Aunty’s house. 
 We played with my cousin in the front lawn. 
We played hide and seek with my cousin. 
My cousin found me first. I was the winner of the game. 
I had a drink of water. I felt excellent. I thought it was cool. 
I had a great time.